Explosive Achievements
Novice Theon Mavidante, Written by Bronson
Posted on Sun, Aug 22, 2010 14:15 pm
Theon wasn’t among those that chuckled as Asha’man Daine made a Saldaean woman do some extremely provocative dance – he didn’t even get excited. Holding saidin this way sent his emotions into a frenzy, making everything scrabble to get at the void all at once. Guilt threatened to overwhelm frustration, self-loathing and debilitating, impotent fury, but none of them could touch him so long as he held onto this shell. The sweetness made him want to sit down and relish the Power, but the shame kept him fixed on the tasks at hand. He’d placed himself in the center of a terrible belief, tricked his mind so thoroughly that he worried at whether or not he’d ever be able to undo what he’d done.
He tried not to concentrate on how awful he felt. After all, there was always the possibility that his imagination had stumbled upon a sacred truth. What if, by seizing the Power, people really were forcing themselves on the pattern? Wasn’t there a reason that those who followed the teaching of Lothaire Mantelar, albeit radically, had mounted an all out war against the women that ruled this Tower? Wasn’t there a reason that women were known throughout the world as vile witches?
Wasn’t there a reason that channeling was against Tairen law?
He studied the flows and canted his head, wondering at how extraordinarily complex they were. Even his brilliant mind had trouble picking them apart. Seizing saidin was like riding a wild stallion bareback on one foot while clenching it’s hair with your toes in the other – even if you could make it do as you liked, the consequences of failure would make any other death seem like a mercy by comparison. The overwhelming combination of exhilaration and ecstasy made it difficult to concentrate and comprehend, despite his eidetic memory.
He closed his eyes, trying to recapture the weaves that Asha’man Daine had woven. Why did they appear complicated? Because he had woven a complicated creature, that’s why. The object of this lesson wasn’t to replicate that which Daine had woven, but to create something new. Reluctantly, he looked again, just long enough to catch what he thought looked like a recurring pattern before a scandalized voice sliced through the giggling crowd.
“Daine!” The sea witch exclaimed.
He blankly waited while the woman demonstrated the weave, thinking about the strange pattern he’d discovered before the Saldaean woman had dissipated. Meanwhile, his finger gently traced the pattern, swirling around almost hypnotically. It was possible that one of the other boys were watching him, perhaps he would understand what Theon was demonstrating – or hypothesizing. When he tried to recall the weaves, they were fuzzy in his mind; it was rather like trying to recall something he’d read or seen in a dream.
The Asha’man demonstrated again. Theon studied again. His theory was correct.
He looked at the subtle way that this weave had varied from the other weaves, scratching his chin as if musing over what he would create. His body was beginning to ache from the strain of holding saidin so long – he was weak, after all. Not like other boys, who could seize the power for the better part of an hour before they began to feel exhaustion.
He took a deep breath as he was given leave to make his own shape, but trouble was, there wasn’t enough water. His bowl was only half-full. After looking at some of the thick flows that Sadrok seemed to be weaving, Theon decided to take another route entirely. He didn’t need threads of yarn, he needed threads of linen.
So he made them.
Water came out so quickly, so easily that it almost made him proud. That is, until he remembered what it was he was doing to the pattern. This gentle reminder – that was a man, forcing the pattern to do as he willed – seemed to dominate his thoughts, making it difficult to concentrate. His first creation fell into the bowl, splashing along the sides. So did his second, and his third.
Finally, he reached out to the strands of spilled water, drawing them toward the bowl. It was strange, being able to feel the water as if it was a part of him. He began again by drawing everything into the bowl, and then lifting the water up, back into the oblong shape that he’d created before. This time, however, he took hold of the core composition of the weave, winding the threads tightly around the spine of the weave and laying a net over the skin, then replicating this pattern as the water was drawn out.
What stared at him was a large grub worm. Tentatively, he reached out to shape it with his hands; it was much easier to make the construction conform to the shape he needed if he just guided it, ever so gently, with his fingers. He kept the spine of the weave into a tightly woven cord, flaring it out like a wire-frame around the head of the grub worm. With the sweep of his hands, he curled the head into a point, then did the same with its tail. It was too fat, too short. He stretched it out longer, making it into an earthworm with a bulbous head.
The Asha’man circled him, momentarily intrigued. In the void — what of it he could call the void — he didn’t feel any pressure at the blackcoat’s sudden appearance. Other emotions assailed him from the outside, but only one of them mattered. No time to bury himself in it. He leaned in, narrowing his eyes as he worked A crease here, some knots there…yes, those almost looked like eyes. The crease suggested a mouth, now…
Suddenly a snake writhed and squirmed about, rearing as if to snap.
“Good job.” Said the Asha’man, moving onto the next project.
But Theon wasn’t finished. What would happen if he tried to shape the mouth a little more, to make a tongue? He looped the wiring about just so…
A pop resounded across the halls of the classroom, and the snake exploded like a skyflower, splattering the students with ten thousand little beads of water.
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OOC: I’m sure you guys know the drill by now, 500 words please, nothing too good or dramatic, you’re all new novices : ) If you’re having trouble finding ideas for what to make with your water, email me and we’ll concoct something. This lesson is now closed unless you have a really good reason or prior permission.
